Thanks Mr. J
Mr. Johnson
I want to thank you. Thank you for leading by example. You make your presence known when you enter the room. Your level of confidence is inspiring to me. The no nonsense approach you take is admirable. It's no wonder why you continue to be successful in life. It's refreshing to know that there are people like yourself that desire to bring out the good qualities of a person. You strive to make an individual look within themselves, so one can see how powerful they really are. Thank you for being real, patient, and understanding.
Throughout the years, your drive, and determination to succeed rubbed off on me. when I wanted to make changes in my life, you were always there to guide me through them. You always gave me sound advice, and led my in the right direction. When I wanted to apply to Cambridge College, you took time from your busy schedule to go with me. I now know you did that to assure me that it was OK to want to take on such a big responsibility. That was a clear message to me that this was the way to move onto the next phase of life.....education. It is so true that knowledge is power. I remember when we first met. I used to hang out at Fred's place often. I heard of you, and finally got the chance to meet you. From there, our relation grew, even though we in different places in our lives. You saw something in me that I didn't. It was you that bought it out. I started to think differently, I started to act differently. It felt so strange, but it also felt good. I thought one way about life. I thought life was impossible to improve, but you showed me that there is always room for improvement. I can remember when you were working on obtaining your masters degree, working full time, and raising a family. I used to say to myself, "how in the hell is he able to do this?" It was obvious, you refused to fail. You wanted better for yourself, and went to great lengths to make sure that happened. We had a talk about that. You explained to me that nothing in life that will make you a better person will ever come easy. 
I still can't believe how you were able to finish you degree program. I remember calling you a few months later, but you didn't answer the phone. A few days later you returned my call, and apologized for not getting back to me sooner. I gave you a hard time about it, telling you when I call, you need to answer me. We shared a laugh. It was then when you hit me with the news. You told me you were busy with going back to school for your PH.D. There was nothing but silence on the phone. I couldn't believe what I was hearing. At first, I thought you were joking with me, but you were indeed very serious. It was that moment that everything changed me. Before knowing this, I had nothing going on in my life that I was proud of. It was you being who you are that got me to where I am today. I'm ready now, ready to complete my mission. My health, family, and education is my focus now. Without you, I don't know where I would be, or where I would be going in life. I can't thank you enough Mr. J
Your Friend
Patrick
Rhyming Ode
"Free"
I used to roam the streets, with no place to go
It was cold, I was bold 
But this was starting to get old
Had to take my pride, place it to the side, found my ride
Hit my stride
I had one last chance to survive 
Made some cheddar
Things got better
Now I'm tougher than leather 
Mind got cleaver
Pulled the lever 
Flushed that old life forever
Chorus
can't you see
this is me
one last chance to be free
can't you see 
this is me
one last chance to be free
can't you see
this is me
one last chance to be free
Now my brain is clear
Look at all my fans cheer
The evolution is near, take a seat in the rear
I've equipped myself
Got my health
About to go out for self
Deal what dealt
Move in stealth
Beat my brain with this knowledge till it welts
Chorus
can't you see 
this is me 
one last chance to be free
can't you see
this is me 
one last chance to be free
can't you see
this is me 
on last chance to be free
No more roaming the streets
Place to sleep, food to eat 
Time to make life complete
Got no time for repeats
Learned hard, life is a struggle
Made my moves on the double
Time to shave 
Got me some stubble
Cleaned up, stayed out of trouble
Can't live life in a bubble
Chorus 
can't you see
this is me
one last chance to be free
can't you see 
this is me
one last chance to be free
can't you see 
this is me
one last chance to be free
My name is P
Patrick,
ReplyDeleteExcellent second post. Your letter is filled with appreciation, and I like that you explain how this man was a true role model to you - and an inspiration to go back to school and take on more in life. It seems like you have a great mentor that is striving at the same time as you - a bit of a contemporary - someone to try to keep up with. That's powerful stuff.
Your poem - a hip hop - is great. It has great flow, creative lines, and a good hook of a chorus. It does stray a bit off topic, though, as an ode should be more focused on your subject (your mentor) and less about you.
But I appreciate the effort, and if you continue to put in this awesome energy, you will do very well in this course.
I look forward to seeing how you evolve in your writing.
GR: 87